First, unbiased artistic critique:
Awesome drawing (design to be covered later)!
Definately an improvement over the last stuff you posted (remember, when I accidentally pissed you off?
). I think you had just gotten lazy
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Anyway, the shading seems a little off in some places but I just can't put my finger on how... I'll check back later if I figure it out.
His anatomy seems kinda odd... those legs seem really too short, but I'm assuming your version won't be on the ground much... even so it just looks strange. The positioning on the arms is funky too... hrm... Necks a tad long I think too...
Even though, it's still
really good and definately an improvement!
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Second: Biased Personal Opinion:
(Kedz's gonna kill me...)
Ewwwwwww!!! Not liking this 'Dan design at all >.0 (remember, all IMHO only) Feathers just look... odd... though I think they'd all look better w/o that "beard". Legs too short, neck too long... Eh... just don't like it.
But I LOVE that head (minus beard). Loveitloveitloveit. It's about all I can bear to look at though...
*runs and hides*
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