I need some feedback on this MSPaint drawing I'm currently working on.
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by Godzilla_Fan54 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 11:54 pm
I need some feedback on this MSPaint drawing I'm currently working on.
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by Andrew Nguyen » Sat Aug 18, 2007 11:40 pm
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by mrbluehair » Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:54 pm
I've done a few things with MSPaint....that's a great black and white stipple design.
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by kiryugoji04 » Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:53 pm
Wow, that's a damn fine job for MSPaint!
Couple problems, however. The main one that's really marring this is some pretty wonky perspective on the head. I think the issue here is that you're trying to show us too much of the side farthest from us, leading to a distorted perspective and a blocky, rectangular head. The back of his skull ought to be a bit more rounded, and his jaw should drop at an angle, not straight down as you have it.
I'm not very good at draw-overs, but I did this to try and show you what I mean better...
The other issue is that his hand closest to us looks really flat. I'm having a hard time pinpointing and putting the issue into words, but I think a lot of it has to do with the shape of the shadow it casts. I don't think it should be right behind the hand like you have it.
But still. Damn.
Couple problems, however. The main one that's really marring this is some pretty wonky perspective on the head. I think the issue here is that you're trying to show us too much of the side farthest from us, leading to a distorted perspective and a blocky, rectangular head. The back of his skull ought to be a bit more rounded, and his jaw should drop at an angle, not straight down as you have it.
I'm not very good at draw-overs, but I did this to try and show you what I mean better...
The other issue is that his hand closest to us looks really flat. I'm having a hard time pinpointing and putting the issue into words, but I think a lot of it has to do with the shape of the shadow it casts. I don't think it should be right behind the hand like you have it.
But still. Damn.
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by mrbluehair » Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:56 am
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by mrbluehair » Tue Aug 28, 2007 1:49 pm
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