A idea I've toyed with...

[XvGojira]

I have this fan fic I'm in the middle(begining actually) of re-writting. Possibly having it go on for a while but maybe just a one shot type of deal.

Basicly it is a US Godzilla meets Japanese Godzilla story. You can find my first draft of it at fanfiction.net, but it was written so many years ago it's nuts. Anyway, origanly I used the Godzilla X Megaguirus Godzilla just to really use the DT. (in another rewrite I use a Godzilla more based on 90's and GMK with the world eventually making the DT) And that would send Goji to the US Godzilla world. Chaos insues.

Anyway, in my new re-write (3rd or 4th one I think) There is no univers crossing. The Japanese Godzilla (which I call Gojira to help curbe confusion) is in the G.I.N.O. world. But not really as a mutation of radiation. In this story there are two basic monsters, the mutatation monsters (US Godzilla, and the thing he fought in the cartoon show which is where this is going on in), monster gods (Gojira and anyother monster I feel like having in there).

Godzilla and Goji fight, Goji is victorious but lets Godzilla live. A third monster pops up in the mix and starts beating Goji down but Godzilla distracts it and let Goji get an upper hand. He takes out the monster and find that Godzilla was fataly wounded but gives him some of his energy t revive and make him stronger, etc. I'm not sure who the third monster should be. I origianly thought of King Ghidorah, but I'm thinking he's a bit over used so I'm trying to think of another good opponent. I might have Mothra in there as possibly the only truly human friendly monster. But not sure. I'm thinking of having the Peanutsin it as well, but not apart as Mothra's team, but like small human like monster gods that would help explain things and stuff.

I know there is no way in hell I'll have a finished version of this story for a long time, so I figure if I post either a link to parts of the story, or just put them up on the board, I could get some constructive critisim on it.

This is kind of a big leap for me. I really don;t have any one to really look at my work and tell me what it needs or doesn't other than myself, which can get very frustrating at times.

Anyway, there ya go. What do you think? Question Comments?

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[Monsturra-Jake]

[XvGojira]

[Biohazard85]

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[XvGojira]

Well basicly my thought is that the god monsters were created along with the world/universe, and are the embodiment of an aspect of life or element. I've also thought about what elements some other monsters would be: Gojira=Destruction, Ghidorah=Chaos, Mothra=Peace Hedora=Illness/death. As for Biollante I'd go for something more along the lines of organic life.

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[XvGojira]

Well if any pop up I'll be sure to share it with ya'.

[XvGojira]

Just letting you know that the part I have wiriten of my story (called "King" for right now, title may change). You can find it at my site http://captainrandom.50megs.com/

It won't be hard to find trust me. I'm also going to post this on the fiction board too, but I just wanted to give you heads up.