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Discuss: The Demise

PostPosted: Sun Mar 06, 2005 12:19 am
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Sun Mar 06, 2005 7:39 pm
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 4:33 pm
by Biohazard85
It seems a little hard to follow, meaning that there aren’t enough details shadowing things. I would like to see some of the plot come out to, since that is probably why I ma confused at what's going is because I don't know what should be going on. Constant action hurts a story, if a hint of the plot is not thrown in, then it just seems like a journal of actions that the monster are doing.

Just a good tune up and you will be right on track. :wink:

PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 2:40 am
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 3:18 am
by Rexrapptor
Chapter 3 posted.

PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 2:01 pm
by Biohazard85

PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 5:57 pm
by Biohazard85

PostPosted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 11:06 am
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 12:33 pm
by Biohazard85

PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:48 pm
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 12:56 pm
by Biohazard85