Monster Zero x SciFi Japan - Archive Only

by **Biohazard85** » Tue Mar 29, 2005 4:33 pm

It seems a little hard to follow, meaning that there arenâ€™t enough details shadowing things. I would like to see some of the plot come out to, since that is probably why I ma confused at what's going is because I don't know what should be going on. Constant action hurts a story, if a hint of the plot is not thrown in, then it just seems like a journal of actions that the monster are doing.

Just a good tune up and you will be right on track. :wink:

by **Rexrapptor** » Wed Mar 30, 2005 2:40 am

by **Rexrapptor** » Wed Mar 30, 2005 3:18 am

Chapter 3 posted.

by **Biohazard85** » Wed Mar 30, 2005 2:01 pm

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by **Rexrapptor** » Thu Mar 31, 2005 11:06 am

by **Biohazard85** » Thu Mar 31, 2005 12:33 pm

by **Rexrapptor** » Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:48 pm

by **Biohazard85** » Tue Apr 05, 2005 12:56 pm

Monster Zero x SciFi Japan - Archive Only

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