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Godzilla: The cyber quest( name to change )

PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 11:52 pm
by Rexrapptor
Gojira has finaly been placed under mind control, to control him, they had to use the single most powerful computer on earth. He was to be used as a super weapon. But, when they tried to move him, he just dropped. Goji was in acoma. They needed to hook him up to the internet to keep him liveing, it was the only thing with a large enough server. Goji's brain now had acsess to the Web. He caused problems around the earth, hacking into missle silos and such. Trilloins of people herd this scratchy roar in there headphones or speakers. Anything conected to the web went hay wire.

I need help with the plot, the Goji suit, and other kaiju.

PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 12:51 am
by Rouge Message

PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 2:52 am
by Biohazard85
For once the Internet helps someone live instead of doing what it’s known for.

It's a good plot for a fan fic, and I'll give you any ideas if I came across any. Though, I am having trouble getting past the fact that Godzilla can launch nuclear Missiles? Do you really think that he would know how to do that or even know that they exist? If you were me, I would just have him stumble across the commands for launch some good nuclear missiles as he wonders around this new world.

Maybe for a protagonist of the story, have either a young nerdy or cool, crazy hacker, try to lock Godzilla's mind within the Internet as a last ditch effort. That should give your story some arc.

Also, one word of good advice, don't have him fight a computer virus that would be like putting salt in your readers’ eyes.

PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 11:46 am
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 11:48 am
by Emperor Kedzuel
Not bad, I'd like to read this. I write fanfiction, but I don't read much of other people's fanfiction because it's basically the same stuff. But, this, I wouldn't mind reading--because it has a bit of a twist to it that I try to put in my own.

Some of my own suggestions about the hacking thing.

This is what I did with Kiryuu in the first story, Mechagodzilla X: AI. Kiryuu was a super hacker, but one of the reasons why he was because of his desire to break the bonds of his human controllers, also to access knowledge on his target Godzilla that the humans were keeping him--hinse the attack on Okinawa Base through SatCom. But Kiryuu knew exactly what he was looking for--files on Godzilla.

Godzilla needs to know what he is looking for in order for him to want to become a hacker. I mean, when he's hooked up into the internet, does he know this is some sort of virtual reality, or does he procieve it as a real world. Since his brain is animalistic--would he all of a sudden start to become smarter and smarter the more he spends time in the internet because he now has access to knowledge. Does he become aware of who these tiny creatures are now since he is in the mainframe of their vast knowelege and information. A friend of mine told me once: "The Internet is the largest library in the world, you have access to any knowedge you want as long as you know what you want...because all the books are scattered on the floor."

As long as Godzilla knows what he wants to access, and has a reason to access them--this story could work.

PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 5:24 pm
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 6:53 pm
by Emperor Kedzuel

PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 7:43 pm
by Biohazard85

PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 10:11 pm
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2004 2:21 am
by Emperor Kedzuel

PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2004 11:10 am
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2004 11:14 am
by Rexrapptor

PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 8:27 pm
by Devilzilla

PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 12:48 am
by Rexrapptor


Prelude



Lagos Island is too many considered a Paradise, but, they have only seen pictures, none had ever been there. It’s a paradise until you find out what lives there. Dinosaurs. There on that island, are living breathing dinosaurs. The military of Japan are the only people monitoring it. Two times has a large Tyrannosaur like creature attacked. First in 1954, then next in 1985, It ravaged Tokyo, his blue beam of Nuclear Energy ripping thru buildings like paper. They named the Titan Gojira and Godzilla in America.


This is a rough draft of only the Prelude.

PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 6:11 pm
by Rexrapptor
is this topic dead?