by Emperor Kedzuel » Tue Jan 20, 2004 11:48 am
Not bad, I'd like to read this. I write fanfiction, but I don't read much of other people's fanfiction because it's basically the same stuff. But, this, I wouldn't mind reading--because it has a bit of a twist to it that I try to put in my own.
Some of my own suggestions about the hacking thing.
This is what I did with Kiryuu in the first story, Mechagodzilla X: AI. Kiryuu was a super hacker, but one of the reasons why he was because of his desire to break the bonds of his human controllers, also to access knowledge on his target Godzilla that the humans were keeping him--hinse the attack on Okinawa Base through SatCom. But Kiryuu knew exactly what he was looking for--files on Godzilla.
Godzilla needs to know what he is looking for in order for him to want to become a hacker. I mean, when he's hooked up into the internet, does he know this is some sort of virtual reality, or does he procieve it as a real world. Since his brain is animalistic--would he all of a sudden start to become smarter and smarter the more he spends time in the internet because he now has access to knowledge. Does he become aware of who these tiny creatures are now since he is in the mainframe of their vast knowelege and information. A friend of mine told me once: "The Internet is the largest library in the world, you have access to any knowedge you want as long as you know what you want...because all the books are scattered on the floor."
As long as Godzilla knows what he wants to access, and has a reason to access them--this story could work.
It's my opinion and I'm sticking to it!