Kaiju Ghost

It is up a few days early - Prologue & Chapter One. It is my first attempt at Kaiju fiction and any and all comments would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
Bruce
Bruce
The Board is Down with no repair ETR. My apologies but we don't have the money or resources to repair the issue. It is broken on the back-end and is only here to view as an archive. Thank you for your years of patronage.
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