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Discuss Baran no Gyakyushu

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:21 pm
by Dogora

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 12:28 am
by Biohazard85
Sorry to say, but it's just a blob of words without any substance or plot.

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:20 pm
by briizilla

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:23 pm
by kiryugoji04

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 10:32 pm
by Andrew Nguyen
You'd probably need to do longer passages in order to get a good judge on how it goes. As with what it is at the moment, it looks alright but could use improvements and the like.

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 11:17 pm
by briizilla

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 4:25 am
by Benjamin Haines

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:34 am
by kiryugoji04