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Postby Dogora » Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:21 pm

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Postby Biohazard85 » Fri Sep 14, 2007 12:28 am

Sorry to say, but it's just a blob of words without any substance or plot.
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Postby briizilla » Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:20 pm

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Postby kiryugoji04 » Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:23 pm

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Postby Andrew Nguyen » Fri Sep 14, 2007 10:32 pm

You'd probably need to do longer passages in order to get a good judge on how it goes. As with what it is at the moment, it looks alright but could use improvements and the like.
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Postby briizilla » Fri Sep 14, 2007 11:17 pm

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Postby Benjamin Haines » Mon Sep 17, 2007 4:25 am

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Postby kiryugoji04 » Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:34 am

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