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by **Rexrapptor** » Thu Mar 04, 2004 8:28 pm

Well, Kedzuel, Biohazard, here it is

by **Jorzilla** » Thu Mar 04, 2004 8:35 pm

Wha? There's nothing there. . .

by **Devilzilla** » Thu Mar 04, 2004 11:26 pm

Bravo!! A masterpiece!

by **Biohazard85** » Fri Mar 05, 2004 3:19 am

by **Biohazard85** » Fri Mar 05, 2004 3:22 am

by **Rexrapptor** » Fri Mar 05, 2004 10:52 am

by **Biohazard85** » Fri Mar 05, 2004 3:53 pm

by **Rexrapptor** » Fri Mar 05, 2004 7:26 pm

by **Biohazard85** » Sun Mar 07, 2004 2:22 am

I also have to say, wouldn't this boy have some serious metal problems, since he is diving into Godzilla's mind at such a young age, something that most humans probably couldn't handle?

by **Rexrapptor** » Mon Mar 08, 2004 11:07 am

by **Biohazard85** » Mon Mar 08, 2004 3:38 pm

by **Rexrapptor** » Thu Mar 18, 2004 11:50 pm

Chapter 4 up

by **Biohazard85** » Sat Mar 20, 2004 1:24 am

Just a word of advice, instead of writing one paragraph chapters, why don't go aim for a page or two long chapters. It gives your writers something worth reading.

As for the chapter, I am a little confused as to why the G2 chemical made Godzilla stronger? Then at the end of this chapter, you say that itâ€™s taking over him. I am just a little confused on why that would happen.

by **Rexrapptor** » Sat Mar 20, 2004 10:21 am

the G2 chemical was more of a stimulate trank dart. It was made to weaken Godzilla so they could implant a mind controling device. And, the chemical didnt make him stronger, it was his Sub-Councise takeing over.

by **Biohazard85** » Sat Mar 20, 2004 2:32 pm

Well, why did his "Sub-Councise" make him stronger? And do you mean sub-conscious? But that still adds to the confusion as to why the hell did he get a new beam and everything. You have to show the facts as to why he got stronger. Since, I am sure other people are frowning on that scene since it something that kind of popped up in a weird time.

by **Rexrapptor** » Sat Mar 20, 2004 2:38 pm

by **Rexrapptor** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:04 pm

by **Biohazard85** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:46 am

by **Rexrapptor** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 11:50 am

I want him close to humans. I know about your and Kedz's little fight over how Godzilla shouldnt be close to humans. Well, i prefer it that way, and Godzilla will use that boy in the IM session to host his Soul. It will all unfold.

by **Emperor Kedzuel** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:17 pm

It's not a fight, it's a disagreement. He just didn't like Dark God because of that. But that was the ONLY time I ever posted a story that had Godzilla acting human. All the other times were with Godzilla as a monster.

by **Biohazard85** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:38 pm

It's nothing against the writer, more against myself for hating a intelligent Godzilla.

Though, just because I don't like that one aspect of the story, doesn't mean I won't enjoy the story.

by **Emperor Kedzuel** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 1:05 pm

Don't worry, Bio, I await your thoughts on how I treated Biollante in my story.

And as for this one, it is an interesting concept, sounded better in the synopsis than written down in an actual story. Strange with the IM, Godzilla knows what IM is? Again, the chapters are too short. But, I prefer my chapters to have more detail and be about 5-15 pages long and heavy with dialog. But, that's me.

by **Rexrapptor** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:13 pm

You've got to remember. Im writeing this from Godzilla's point of view. How can a 80metere dinosaur talk to a normal human being?

by **Biohazard85** » Sun Apr 18, 2004 12:39 am

by **Emperor Kedzuel** » Sun Apr 18, 2004 1:09 am

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